I believe that in my synthesis paper I did a good job
searching about how hard it will be for college students/graduates to find a
job in the world. My Purpose Statement and Design Plan were right on the spot
because it reflected everything that I wanted to get touch on. I think I
convinced my audience that it would be hard for college students/graduates to
look for a job in the future because of technology. I used the very detailed
quotes from the articles to get my point across and I believe that I did a good
job with that as well because my paper looked very well written. I made strong
points to every single quote that it would be hard to look for jobs in the
future. Some mistakes I had was explaining every quote because I think I had
good strong points it was just that I need it more details explaining the quote
itself. My synthesis paper overall was very well written like I said because I
think I convinced my audience and made my point across that it would be hard to
get jobs in the future and you will need to travel to find at least one job
because of technology is always increasing over years. Other than that I believe
that my audience are concerned about this problem and will do something about
it.
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