Closing Statement (Synthesis Paper) (Project 3)

I believe that in my synthesis paper I did a good job searching about how hard it will be for college students/graduates to find a job in the world. My Purpose Statement and Design Plan were right on the spot because it reflected everything that I wanted to get touch on. I think I convinced my audience that it would be hard for college students/graduates to look for a job in the future because of technology. I used the very detailed quotes from the articles to get my point across and I believe that I did a good job with that as well because my paper looked very well written. I made strong points to every single quote that it would be hard to look for jobs in the future. Some mistakes I had was explaining every quote because I think I had good strong points it was just that I need it more details explaining the quote itself. My synthesis paper overall was very well written like I said because I think I convinced my audience and made my point across that it would be hard to get jobs in the future and you will need to travel to find at least one job because of technology is always increasing over years. Other than that I believe that my audience are concerned about this problem and will do something about it.

What do I care about?

What I care about the most is my family. I care about my family because I would be lost without them. My family means so much too me that I would do anything just to be with them. My family has been there for me when I was down and I want to do the same to them. My family has given me everything a kid wants in their life. I care so much about my family because I can go and talk to them about anything and they will understand me or even help me. I know they are really harsh with me with school because they never went to High School and they don't want me to make the same mistake as they did. Therefore, I love them for that because without their support I don't know where I would be at. My family knows the best for me and I will continue to make them happy. In my family all we do is support each others goals. My family knows that I have to set an example for my little brothers and I will continue doing that because I I'll do anything for them. Therefore, What i care about the most is my family.



Who cares about this topic?
My family would care about this topic. The reason why they would care about this topic is because we are a family and they do not want other people viewing them as bad parents. Also, the reason they care about this topic is because they want me to succeed in life and want the best for me. Other than that most people wouldn't care about this topic. Most people wouldn't care about this topic because its not effecting them. The only people that this topic is effecting is my family because if I talk nice about my family that they are doing a great job raising me then they will continue what they are doing to keep raising me the way they are.

Writing Project 3: Argument Synthesis

Purpose Statement and Design Plan (Project 3)(Argument Synthesis) Final Draft

Purpose Statement

Purpose: The purpose of my synthesis paper is to analyze a group of authors about the workplace; future, and how different things are going to change like working and hiring.  Dr. Wielgos assigned this project and I wanted to make changes and how it affects everyone that wants a job or is working.  I want my audience to be active about this issue and I want them to understand as well because it affects everyone in this world.  My main priority about this paper is that I want my audience to be concern about the future issue and to work ahead so we wont make the same mistake over.  This paper is truly going to benefit me next week when I start work.  Therefore, I want to help my audience to plan for the future. This paper will be very organized with straightforward points so my audience could understand everything that is going on.

Audience:  My audience will be students who are getting a future job. They should take a look into their jobs for more information and should see what the future has for them.  My audience should read my paper when they are alone in the library or outside of class where there is no noise so they could focus reading it.  When they finish I wanted them to be able to look at their future and see if there’s an issue or not. Also, they will understand that there will be effects on their future and they will be changes for the up coming years.  Lastly, after reading this paper my audience will be able to change their future or not change their future.

Context: The time people should read my paper is when they are in school because that’s when they have their mind focus and ready to read.  My audience needs to be in the right zone because if they are not then they will not take this serious and wont even understand the point of this paper. Therefore, the place people should read this paper is when they are in school and are focus and learn about the future.

Design Plan

Strategy: What I want to do is get my audience to right away get a clue of what the paper is going to be about so they can get ideas and get predictions. I will be using four sources and I will explain every single one so my audience can understand my point I’m getting across. 

Ethos: I will explain my four sources so my audience could see that my argument is strong and has good points that I want to get across. This is going to be a strong paper because I’m going to have four sources that will keep my essay with a nice flow.

Pathos: I would say that in the future there would be a lot of changes in jobs for people, but mostly for students. This paper will bring a lot of attention for those who really want to work.

Logos: I will have a lot of examples with fully detailed quotes so my audience can understand the future and will be concentrated in the future as well with jobs. Also, that there is away to stop the future and fix the issue.

Medium: This paper is an academic one; therefore, I will have MLA format during my whole process. This paper will be a six to seven page with citations included. This paper will get the message across and my audience will now learn about the future and pay more attention to it. Also, they will understand fully what my argument is about.

Argument: I just want my audience to understand the argument and how the future will look like with all these changes in the workplace. The only reason why this issue is important is because it affects every single one of us in this world.

Purpose Statement and Design Plan (Project 3)(Argument Synthesis) Draft

Purpose Statement

Purpose: The purpose of my synthesis paper is to analyze a group of authors about the workplace; future, and how different things are going to change like working and hiring.  Dr. Wielgos assigned this project and I wanted to make changes and how it affects everyone that wants a job or is working.  I want my audience to be active about this issue and I want them to understand as well because it affects everyone in this world.  My main priority about this paper is that I want my audience to be concern about the future issue and to work ahead so we wont make the same mistake over.  This paper is truly going to benefit me next week when I start work.  Therefore, I want to help my audience to plan for the future. This paper will be very organized with straightforward points so my audience could understand everything that is going on.

Audience:  My audience will be students who are getting a future job. They should take a look into their jobs for more information and should see what the future has for them.  My audience should read my paper when they are alone in the library or outside of class where there is no noise so they could focus reading it.  When they finish I wanted them to be able to look at their future and see if there’s an issue or not. Also, they will understand that there will be effects on their future and they will be changes for the up coming years.  Lastly, after reading this paper my audience will be able to change their future or not change their future.

Closing Statements (Project 2)

When comparing my statement of purpose, design plan, and my final paper I feel that I did a very good job on what I wanted to bring home to my audience. I know I did a good job because I analyzed every movie with good detail and gave examples of the real world as well. I knew this would be a perfect thing because all pictures were all the same a guy and a girl hold and looking at each other. My photo essay was a lot different from this paper. The reason why is because for my photo essay it was more of taking pictures and less words and for the rhetorical analysis is more words and less pictures. To be honest, I think I did a good job on both papers and I gave good examples to show my audience what I wanted to get across.

Visual and Rhetorical Analysis of a Movie Poster (Project 2)